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Yiraldy Guzman Hilario 100337636
Prewriting:
Clustering
Entertainment communication
Possible Topic Sentence
-Since technology exist, many people spent a lot of time using the internet. -Technology has stolen our real life. -The use of technology is a way to enter in a virtual life and forget your real life. X
Narrow down the topic: Technology
Controlling idea: is a way to enter in a virtual life and forget your real life.
Topic sentence: The use of technology is a way to enter in a virtual life and forget your
real life.
Support Ideas
-Since technology exist, many people spend 10 hours using internet. x
- Dependence of technology. -Some People don’t do their task, because they prefer do something else on the internet. x -People became lazy. x -Technology take us away from our family and friends.
- Fake identity while using the internet. -People do all the stuff through the internet like buying instead of going to a store, etc.
Draft and revising-editing
The use of technology is a way to enter in a virtual life and forget your real life. Many people have dependence on technology, spending(Many people have dependence on technology, for example: a lot of people spend) a lot of hours in front of a computer or laptop, ( it is like they cannot live without it)the man no longer needs to think, technology do everything for them. People are forgetting of their real life, people socialize and communicate via digital devices rather than through real life contact, so people disconnect of their real word and separate of their family and friend. Another thing, is that technology reduce the human effort, because the majority of the work is done by machines. People become lazy because they prefer do anything. Besides, through technology on social media many people use fake identity, this could be for bullying, trolling, stalking, threatening, and insulting behavior, which have all increased with the rise of the internet. Now (finally), people usually do all their buying through internet, technology machines replace (are replacing) humans. For example: People shop online, do their banking online, pay bills online, etc. Technology is taking us away of our real life letting machines do everything for us.
Final Draft
The use of technology is a way to enter in a virtual life and forget your real life. Many people have dependence on technology, for example: a lot of people spend a lot of hours in front of a computer or laptop, it is like they cannot live without it. Another thing is, people are forgetting of their real life, now, people socialize and communicate via digital devices rather than through real life contact, so people disconnect of their real word and separate of their family and friend. Besides, through technology on social media many people use fake identity, this could be for bullying, trolling, stalking, threatening, and insulting behavior, which have all increased with the rise of the internet. Finally, people usually do all their buying through internet, technology machines are replacing humans. For example: People shop online, do their banking online, pay bills online, etc. Technology is taking us away of our real life, now machines do everything for us and we are forgetting of the details of having a real life.
