Comparing and Contrasting: A Student's Experience in Private and Public High Schools, Exercises of English Language

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Essay & Paragraph Development Tutorial:

Comparing and Contrasting

Writing Center

English 800 Center

YOU DO NOT NEED TO PRINT THIS TUTORIAL! All notes and exercises should be done on separate sheets of paper, which you will bring to your conference with an instructor in the center. As you work through the tutorial, make sure to see an instructor in the Writing Center or English 800 Center if you have any questions or difficulties.

While this tutorial will not give you a simple format for something called “the comparison contrast essay,” it will give you some practice with strategies that will help you generate ideas, organize your thoughts, and show transitions in your writing so that your readers will follow along. Using these strategies can help you with some of the difficulties that all writers face.

Getting Started

On the very first day of her first semester writing course in college, Geneva receives the following assignment as homework: In a short (3-5 pages) essay, explain whether you believe your own school experiences so far have been mostly positive or negative. Try to use plenty of specific examples from your experiences to support a thesis that makes a point about education in general. This is the kind of open-ended assignment that many students find intimidating. What does this teacher want? Why does she assign this on the first stinking day? And does she really think 3- 5 pages is “short?” After brainstorming for a while, Geneva realized that she had a unique experience, having attended both an open admissions public high school and an expensive, exclusive private high school. A good way to organize her essay might be to compare and contrast these two school systems in order to make a general point about private versus public education. She begins generating ideas by writing out a list of all the major things she can remember from both schools: PRIVATE HIGH SCHOOL PUBLIC HIGH SCHOOL small classes—15 students max big classes— 25 - 40 students in most expensive free teachers strict teachers not strict at all dress code: black and white only—uniforms wear (almost) anything—no gang colors or short skirts, otherwise OK good, healthy food in cafeteria cafeteria food so bad we all go to McDonald’s some students snotty some students snotty

same religion for all students: Catholic many different religions—Jewish, Protestant, Muslim, Buddhist, and so on— met lots of new people felt guilty not studying (waste my parents’ $!) didn’t do much homework, didn’t care lots of cliques lots of cliques homework and tests—tons homework and tests—tons brand new textbooks old textbooks A list such as this one is a great place to start generating ideas for an essay that uses comparison and contrast. Geneva has some information that she can describe in her essay as she tries to make a general point about which experience was better for her. Notice that some of the information shows similarities (grounds for comparison) while some shows differences (grounds for contrast). Throughout this tutorial, you will be developing a topic by using the same strategies Geneva uses to develop her comparison/contrast of public and private high school.

Exercise 1

Instructions: Choose one topic from the bulleted list below (or in the space provided write a topic you find more interesting).

• the person you are today and the person you would like to be in the future
• two different movies you have seen recently (two you liked equally or one you liked and one you did not)
• high school and college
• your own favorite type of music and another kind of music that you don’t like
• your favorite school subject and your least favorite or two that you like or dislike equally
• an ideal job—the best one you can imagine for yourself—and your current job NOTE : Try to pick a topic you think might be genuinely interesting, one that you really have something to say about. You’re going to be stuck with it for most of the exercises in this tutorial!

Noticing Similarities and Differences

As Geneva was writing her list, she noticed both similarities and differences between the two schools. This is an important part of essays that ask you to both compare and contrast two things and is often useful even in writing that does not require both. Sometimes it helps to write out the similarities and differences together or to draw lines connecting your two columns. Geneva creates new lists to see the similarities and differences: Public and Private: Similarities snotty students cliques lots of homework and tests Public and Private: Differences Private School: smaller classes more strict teachers dress code good food same religion for all students I felt pressured to study had up-to-date textbooks

Exercise 2

Instructions: On a separate sheet of paper or in the space below, organize your own lists from above by listing the similarities under one heading and the differences under another. Similarities between your two items : Differences between your two items:

Classifying by creating categories

Sometimes it is more helpful to create categories for the things you are comparing and contrasting rather than just listing how they are similar and different. Creating categories requires you to think of similarities between things that you may not have noticed as you listed them at first. For example, consider the following random list of college courses that a group of students might take in the first two years:

• English Composition
• Business Math
• Second Year Astronomy
• Symbolic Logic
• Second Year Computer Programming
• Basic Chemistry
• African History
• Shakespeare
• Cultural Anthropology
• The Films Of Keanu Reeves
• First Year Arabic
• Psychology
• Philosophy
• Music Appreciation
• Art History In order to explain their graduation requirements, colleges often categorize these courses in groups according to the different sets of skills they require and teach:
• Courses that require math and logic o Business Math o Symbolic Logic o Second Year Computer Programming o Second Year Astronomy
• Courses that require extensive reading and writing o English Composition o African History o Shakespeare o Cultural Anthropology o Philosophy o Art History

Exercise 3

Instructions: Using the lists of information you have already written out, try to create new categories of your own for organizing. Your categories may include some overlapping items (as Geneva’s example includes “strict teachers” in more than one category). Create at least three categories and list the relevant items under each heading. Category One: _____________________________________ Category Two: _____________________________________ Category Three: _____________________________________

Organizing by Outlining

How you go about organizing your essay will depend on many different factors such as your intended audience (how much will your readers already know about the subject?) and your purpose in making the comparison. But the outlines included in this section are a good way to think about how your organization might make the information you are presenting clear to your readers for a variety of subjects. The Parallel Method When you use the parallel method, you simply present all of the information you have on your first topic and then do the same for your second.

• Introduction: Provides background information and presents a thesis statement about the topics being discussed
• Section on Topic A o one quality of topic A o second quality of topic A o third quality of topic A o (and so on, depending on the topic)

• Section on Topic B o one quality of topic B o second quality of topic B o third quality of topic B o (and so on, depending on the topic)
• Conclusion: Sums up the major issue or makes a recommendation based on the information provided For Geneva’s information, the outline might look like this:
• Introduction: Explains why people debate about public and private schools and presents my thesis that private schools created more stress for me and many other students
• Section on Public Schools o laid back teachers o didn’t feel pressured to study o lots of homework and tests o students can dress however they want, almost
• Section on Private Schools o strict teachers o felt pressured to study o lots of homework and tests o uniforms only
• Conclusion: private schools created the kind of pressure that forced me to learn a little more but made me hate school more than ever Notice that the items under each section are similarities or differences of the qualities being compared—laid back teachers versus strict teachers, for example. Also notice that these are sections, not paragraphs; Geneva’s actual essay, like yours, may involve several paragraphs on her first topic before moving on to her second. This may seem to be the easiest way to create an outline, but whether it will work for your final essay depends in part on how much information you are presenting. If you are discussing something fairly detailed and complex, you may write many paragraphs or even pages about topic A before moving on to topic B, by which time some of your less attentive readers may not remember the more subtle details of topic A.

The Point By Point Method This method allows you to show similarities and differences between your topics one at a time, often by using categories such as those you created in exercise three.

• Introduction: Provides background information and presents a thesis statement about the topics being discussed
• One quality of both A and B
• A second quality of both A and B
• A third quality of both A and B
• A fourth quality of both A and B
• and so on, depending on the information
• Conclusion: Sums up the major issue or makes a recommendation based on the information provided Using this method, Geneva’s outline might become:
• Introduction: (as above) Explains why people debate about public and private schools and presents my thesis that private schools created more stress for me and many other students
• Uniforms versus open clothing policy
• homework and tests in both schools
• pressure to study--different in public and private schools
• cliques and snotty students in both schools
• Conclusion: (as above) private schools created the kind of pressure that forced me to learn a little more but made me hate school more than ever Notice that the qualities listed in the point-by-point comparison can be similar or different---one section in Geneva's essay might compare the cliques in both schools while another section contrasts the different pressures to study.

Exercise 5

Instructions: Organize your information into a point-by-point outline. Try to include at least four points. Introduction: ___________________________________________________________________ First quality of _____________________________and ________________________________:

Second quality: _________________________________________________________________ Third quality: __________________________________________________________________ Fourth quality: _________________________________________________________________ Conclusion: ___________________________________________________________________ The Similarities and Differences Method This method allows you to focus first on all the qualities that your two issues have in common, then on the differences; of course you can also do this in reverse, focusing first on the differences and then the similarities. What order you choose may depend on what conclusion you want readers to remember. Are the differences more important than the similarities? If so, then you might put the differences second. If you are arguing that the similarities are more important, then putting the similarities after the differences might make the point more effectively.

• Introduction: As above
• Similar qualities of A and B o First similarity o Second similarity o Third Similarity o and so on
• Different qualities of A and B o First difference o Second Difference o Third difference o and so on
• Conclusion: as above It does not matter if you have the same number of similarities and differences in each section; the point is to organize them clearly so that readers will find them in the same sections of your paper.

Writing the Essay

A strong outline can provide you with guidelines that you should keep in mind when you are organizing your essay. You should not, however, feel the need to stick completely to your outline without making any changes. If you realize as you are writing that you have new ideas about similarities and differences between your subjects or that you want to change your thesis statement to explain a different main point, you should feel free to do so. It is always easier to make changes to an outline than to your final essay! Transition Words and Phrases If your essay is well organized, your readers will often see the connections between your ideas fairly easily. But it is often helpful to provide specific transitions between sections of your paper so that readers will be able to see when you are making a shift--moving from discussions of similarities to differences, for example, or discussing a new point. Many specific words and phrases can help you show the logical relationships between your ideas. This tutorial will provide you with a few of the words that can help you show transitions and will give you some practice using them in sentences. If you need a refresher course in the rules for punctuation in sentences using these kinds of words, see the tutorial on Coordination and Subordination. Words and phrases that show contrast (differences between two things)

• but
• yet
• on the other hand
• in contrast
• however
• although
• though
• while
• even though Words and phrases that show comparison (similarities between two things)
• and
• both
• in addition
• like
• as
• at the same time

Exercise 7

Instructions: Using the previous list of words and phrases, create sentences for each pair of items below by joining those in column A to those in column B. As an example, number one has been completed for you. Column A Column B

1. circus clowns don't make much money corporate executives are well paid (show differences) Solution: While circus clowns don't make much money, corporate executives are well paid.
2. computer programmers work long hours clowns work long hours (show similarities)
3. circus clowns work with people and animals zookeepers work only with animals (show differences)
4. doctors have huge responsibilities circus clowns take long vacations (show differences)
5. librarians have to be quiet clowns have to be noisy (show differences)
6. movie stars sign autographs clowns sign autographs (show similarities)
7. secretaries wear comfortable shoes clowns' shoes don't fit (show differences)
8. nightclub bouncers have to be tough clowns have to be funny (show differences)
9. clowns get laughed at college professors get laughed at (show similarities)
10. clowns live in fabulous mansions anthropologists live in grass huts (show differences)