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Sustainability Essay - Environment and Society | ENVS 101, Papers of Environmental Science

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Ginger Kowal
ENVS 101
4-21-05
Sustainability Essay
Is the food system that I participate in in my hometown of Asheville, North Carolina,
sustainable? If not, what alternative food systems could I participate in, and how sustainable
would they be? [Great question]
As a resident in the inner suburbs of the small city of Asheville in the mountains of western
North Carolina, one of the choices that I make every day that has an extremely large impact on both
the local and global environment is the food that I choose to buy and eat. The food system that I
choose to participate in has a large and continuous effect on the environment, because food comes
necessarily from the manipulation of natural processes and because the choice of what food to eat is
made multiple times daily. In this study [essay?], I am interested in assessing whether or not the food
system that I participate in, which is the food system that most residents of Asheville use, is
sustainable. If this food system is judged not to be sustainable, I mean to pose some alternatives and to
judge the sustainability of this alternative in turn. For the purposes of this study, I will consider that an
activity which is sustainable is an activity that does not rely on nonrenewable material or energy
resources, and that does not cause irreparable or continuous damage to any natural ecosystem. [nice
clear introduction]
The food that is for sale at most Asheville supermarkets is not local and not organically grown.
Because the land that surrounds the city of Asheville is mountainous, farming in the area has
historically been of a scale that is severely limited by the terrain of the area and the limitations of the
land. These small farms are not able to compete with the large-scale industrial farms that exist in other
areas of the country, and therefore it is from these industrial farms that most of the food in average
Asheville supermarkets comes from [you might define specifically what you mean by industrial farm].
The food in the supermarkets is thus trucked in from diverse and widely spread areas of the country, or
shipped in from international producers. Because the farms are so far away and because food is
minimally labeled as to its origins, consumers in Asheville generally have very little knowledge of the
type of farm that their food came from, or of the methods used in its production. There is almost no
organic food available at the average supermarket in Asheville, and so all of the food that I, and other
average residents, buy is grown using conventional, non-organic methods.
According to the provided definition of sustainability, this conventional food system in
Asheville is not sustainable because of many factors. The transportation of the food itself from farm
throughout the country to the consumers in Asheville supermarkets is supremely unsustainable because
it uses vast amounts of nonrenewable resources, and causes damage to natural ecosystems on a global
scale. The most common form of transportation for food across the country is by tractor trailer. These
vehicles use nonrenewable fossil fuels to run, and contribute significantly to nationwide emissions of
CO2 [might be useful to cite a statistic here]. The emissions of CO2 caused by fossil fuel combustion,
in combination with other factors, has been largely responsible for an increase in global atmospheric
concentrations of CO2 from 315ppm in 1957 to 362ppm in 1997 (Vitousek et al. 1997). This increase
in CO2 in the earth’s atmosphere is chief among human activities which scientists agree
“unequivocally” have substantially changed the earth’s climate (Oreskes 2004). Thus the nationwide
system of food distribution, which includes Asheville consumers like myself, is implicated in causing
global warming, which has already caused damage to many vulnerable ecosystems worldwide [again,
cite a reference here].
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Ginger Kowal ENVS 101 4-21- Sustainability Essay Is the food system that I participate in in my hometown of Asheville, North Carolina, sustainable? If not, what alternative food systems could I participate in, and how sustainable would they be? [Great question] As a resident in the inner suburbs of the small city of Asheville in the mountains of western North Carolina, one of the choices that I make every day that has an extremely large impact on both the local and global environment is the food that I choose to buy and eat. The food system that I choose to participate in has a large and continuous effect on the environment, because food comes necessarily from the manipulation of natural processes and because the choice of what food to eat is made multiple times daily. In this study [essay?], I am interested in assessing whether or not the food system that I participate in, which is the food system that most residents of Asheville use, is sustainable. If this food system is judged not to be sustainable, I mean to pose some alternatives and to judge the sustainability of this alternative in turn. For the purposes of this study, I will consider that an activity which is sustainable is an activity that does not rely on nonrenewable material or energy resources, and that does not cause irreparable or continuous damage to any natural ecosystem. [nice clear introduction] The food that is for sale at most Asheville supermarkets is not local and not organically grown. Because the land that surrounds the city of Asheville is mountainous, farming in the area has historically been of a scale that is severely limited by the terrain of the area and the limitations of the land. These small farms are not able to compete with the large-scale industrial farms that exist in other areas of the country, and therefore it is from these industrial farms that most of the food in average Asheville supermarkets comes from [you might define specifically what you mean by industrial farm]. The food in the supermarkets is thus trucked in from diverse and widely spread areas of the country, or shipped in from international producers. Because the farms are so far away and because food is minimally labeled as to its origins, consumers in Asheville generally have very little knowledge of the type of farm that their food came from, or of the methods used in its production. There is almost no organic food available at the average supermarket in Asheville, and so all of the food that I, and other average residents, buy is grown using conventional, non-organic methods. According to the provided definition of sustainability, this conventional food system in Asheville is not sustainable because of many factors. The transportation of the food itself from farm throughout the country to the consumers in Asheville supermarkets is supremely unsustainable because it uses vast amounts of nonrenewable resources, and causes damage to natural ecosystems on a global scale. The most common form of transportation for food across the country is by tractor trailer. These vehicles use nonrenewable fossil fuels to run, and contribute significantly to nationwide emissions of CO 2 [might be useful to cite a statistic here]. The emissions of CO 2 caused by fossil fuel combustion, in combination with other factors, has been largely responsible for an increase in global atmospheric concentrations of CO 2 from 315ppm in 1957 to 362ppm in 1997 (Vitousek et al. 1997). This increase in CO 2 in the earth’s atmosphere is chief among human activities which scientists agree “unequivocally” have substantially changed the earth’s climate (Oreskes 2004). Thus the nationwide system of food distribution, which includes Asheville consumers like myself, is implicated in causing global warming, which has already caused damage to many vulnerable ecosystems worldwide [again, cite a reference here].

The farming methods used in industrial agriculture, where most of the food in the Asheville supermarkets comes from, also use nonrenewable materials and are therefore not sustainable. Industrial agriculture mines nutrients from the soil, shifts them to a different locale where they are consumed, and never returns the vital nutrients to the soil. In order to counteract this massive nutrient loss from the soil, synthetic fertilizers and pesticides are needed on a large scale (Foster and Magdoff 1998). The production of these high-nutrient fertilizers is very energy intensive (Foster and Magdoff 1998), and most synthetic fertilizers are made by the burning of fossil fuels. In addition to the fact that the fossil fuels used to produce the fertilizer on which the farm depends are nonrenewable, the process by which these fossil fuels are burned further contributes to an increase in greenhouse gases in the atmosphere (Karl and Trenberth 2003). The synthetic fertilizers and pesticides used in industrial agriculture are also damaging to local and “downstream” ecosystems in and of themselves. Because agricultural fertilizers are soluble, they contribute to eutrophication in the streams and lakes that they wash into, and can also make groundwater unsafe for human consumption (Foster and Magdoff 1998). The process by which nitrogen based chemical fertilizers are made fixes nitrogen from the atmosphere and converts it into a form that is usable by plants [note that ALL fertilizers, whether organic or inorganic are chemical fertilizers]. To demonstrate the magnitude of synthetic fertilizer production and usage, it is helpful to realize that the nitrogen that is fixed by humans sums to at least the same amount that is fixed by all natural sources combined (Vitousek et al. 1997). In addition, the conventional food system engenders and maintains a series of human-human and human-land disconnects including those: between consumers and farmers, who are so distantly separated; between consumers and the food that they buy, because its origins are unknown; and between consumers and the land of their own home region, because they are not aware of what food products may be grown there. There are a number of alternative food systems that are available to me as an Asheville resident. To be truthful, I have already chosen to make many of these changes and to no longer shop at the conventional supermarkets, although I am still working on convincing my parents to switch from the conventional food system described above to one that would be more sustainable. Asheville actually affords many options to those who are interested in buying food that is more sustainably grown or produced, which makes it easier for all of us to choose to be a part of a more sustainable food system. I could choose to buy my food at the organic supermarkets in Asheville, and not in the bigger, conventional, chain supermarkets. Or I could choose to buy food from local farmers at the tailgate market held in my neighborhood on every Saturday morning. Despite Asheville’s mountainous terrain, I know that there is an encouraging [increasing?] number of small family farms in the region. They are managing to make a living in western North Carolina because there are many people in Asheville who are concerned about and interested in a local food system. Alternatively, I could go one step further and become a member of a CSA (Community Supported Agriculture) farm, such as one that is owned by close friends of my family, where I could participate in the growing of my own food and see firsthand where it comes from and how it is grown. [seems like it might be an easy sell to get your parents to agree to this, no?] To buy food from an organic supermarket in town would be more sustainable than buying it at a conventional chain store, but it wouldn’t be perfectly sustainable. It would be an improvement, to be sure, because many of the harmful effects associated with conventional agriculture are not associated with organic agriculture. By buying certified organic food, I could be assured that synthetic fertilizers and pesticides would not have been used on the farm where the food was grown. Thus, organic agriculture does not use the same amount of nonrenewable fossil fuels in the production of synthetic fertilizer. Most of the organic food that is available in Asheville organic supermarkets, however, comes from very far away. The most common source for organic products seems to be California by an overwhelming margin, but it is likely that produce or products could have come from Washington state, Pennsylvania, Vermont, or even Mexico, all of which are far away from North Carolina. The

interesting thought, but needs further explanation. On a community level, I would think that human ability and energy might be considered renewable. Obviously we are born and eventually die and in that sense sustainability has a different meaning for individuals]. In conclusion, no food system currently available to me as a resident of Asheville is perfectly sustainable. To buy food from the conventional chain stores is unsustainable because it uses nonrenewable resources and causes continuous damage to ecosystems in both its production and transportation. Of the many alternative food sources that exist in Asheville, all are more sustainable than the conventional food system. However, none of them are perfectly sustainable. Therefore it appears that the best choice for me of where and how to buy food is one that takes into consideration what is possible for me personally and what aspects of sustainability I would most like to maximize. Literature Cited: Foster, J. B., and F. Magdoff. 1998. Liebig, Marx, and the depletion of soil fertility: relevance for today's agriculture. Monthly Review 50 pgs. 32-45. Karl, T. R., and K. E. Trenberth. 2003. Modern global climate change. Science 302:1719-1723. Murray, M. E., and J. E. Petersen. 2004. Payback and Currencies of Energy, Carbon Dioxide and Money for a 60 KW Photovoltaic Array. Link from Oberlin College ERes. Oreskes, N. 2004. The scientific consensus on climate change. Science 306:1686. Vitousek, P. M., H. A. Mooney, J. Lubchenco, and J. M. Melillo. 1997. Human domination of the earth’s ecosystems. Science 277:494-499. Grading criteria for your question:  Is of appropriate breadth for a 3-4 page essay – question must be narrow enough in scope to be answerable within limitations. yes  Focuses on one particular issue related to your own experience (e.g. land use, power generation, human relationships, the economics of small businesses, life in Oberlin dorms and coops, etc.). yes  Addresses issues of sustainability at multiple scales, including the local scale. yes Grading criteria for your answer:  Provides a thoughtful and tailored definition of sustainability for the particular issue addressed. Be certain that this definition is specific to your topic; do not provide a generic definition that applies to all things. yes  Draws extensively (and correctly cites) readings used in class. Use at least three references from class readings. If you draw on other sources, be certain to cite these as well. (Note that neglecting to cite ideas or text that come from other sources is a violation of academic ethics and of the Oberlin honor code). yes  Considers aspects of both scientific and human dimensions of sustainability. Yes, but see comment below  Writing is of high quality: logic is well organized; each paragraph contains a clear topic sentences; assertions and opinions are supported with evidence, conclusion draws together ideas and follows from essay; grammar is used correctly, references are appropriately cited, spelling and typographical errors are minimal. Yes!  Writing conforms to standards outlined in “ENVS101 Writing guidelines” (also linked on home page of website). Watch out for over-use of semicolons Ginger: This is a wonderful little essay – well organized, well written, thoughtful and personal. You do a great job of drawing broadly from the materials we have read and discussed in this course. It would have

been interesting if you had further explored some of the social and community aspects of what sustainable food might mean in your region. What sort of social relationships are necessary for a sustainable food system to come about in your region, and how might the agricultural system contributed to community level sustainability? It also would have been interesting for you to reflect on how a sustainable food system works for someone in college – obviously you are only home for part of the year and this presumably limits your options. You already have a level of writing skill that relatively few Oberlin students obtain by the time that they graduate. I urge you to do good things with this skill!